Jungle Tree

Posted: September 28, 2014 in Dalvir Gill, Dalvir Gill, Dalvir Gill, Haiga, Hokku, Photography, Writer
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echoes of
an endless dance . . .
jungle tree

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  1. dalvirgill says:
    September 28, 2014 at 3:40 am

    Dalvir Gill‎BACK TO HOKKU
    January 9 · Brampton ·

    echoes
    an endless dance . . .
    a jungle tree
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    Robert D. Wilson This reads like three separate thoughts without continuity; perhaps due to translation from one language to another.

1. echoes
2. an endless dance
3. a jungle tree
January 10 at 1:08am · Like
Dalvir Gill would putting an 'of' at the end of L1 help?
January 10 at 1:25am · Like · 1
Robert D. Wilson Yes, good idea
January 10 at 3:38am · Unlike · 1
Robert D. Wilson echoes of
an endless dance . . .
jungle tree
January 10 at 7:06am · Unlike · 3
Dalvir Gill Thank You, Master!
January 10 at 12:49pm · Like · 1

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