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sunrise . . .
a wanderer from the
rose cutting

ਸੂਰਜ ਉਦੈ . . .
ਕਲਮ ਦੀ ਅੱਖ ‘ਚ
ਇੱਕ ਰਮਤਾ

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  1. dalvirgill says:

    https://www.facebook.com/groups/punjabihaiku/permalink/10153026501792729/

    Dalvir Gill
    August 2 · Brampton

    ਫੇਰੀਵਾਲਾ . . .
    ਕਲਮ ਦੀ ਅੱਖ ‘ਚੋਂ
    ਉੱਗਿਆ ਸੂਰਜ
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    Amanpreet Pannu, Surinder Spera, Jagraj Singh Norway and 19 others like this.
    Sarbjit Singh ਆਹਾ !!!
    August 3 at 12:59am · Like · 1
    Dalvir Gill Thanks Sarbjit Singh VeerJi:
    ਕਲਮ = ਧਰਤੀ ਵਿੱਚ ਦੱਬਿਆ ਟਾਹਣੀ ਦਾ ਟੋਟਾ
    August 4 at 6:48pm · Like · 4
    Sarbjit Singh ਕਿਆ ਬਾਤ ਹੈ ...!!!
    August 4 at 8:42pm · Unlike · 1
    Harvinder Dhaliwal Bilaspur
    August 4 at 9:13pm · Unlike · 1
    Gurmukh Bhandohal Raiawal
    Sohna manvikrn aa Dalvir bhaa
    August 4 at 11:27pm · Like
    Dalvir Gill Gurmukh hun kaasdaa maanvikrn ho giyaa?
    August 4 at 11:31pm · Like
    Gurmukh Bhandohal Raiawal Oh veer bahut sohna manvikrn aa baki vidwan dass skde ne aapa taa aap anjan aa 😇
    August 4 at 11:34pm · Like · 1
    Dalvir Gill a free translation of this poem has been suggest to alter like this ( i've embraced it )
    
    sun rises
    from the rose-cutting . . .
    a wanderer
    
    sunrise . . .
    a wanderer from the
    rose cutting
    August 6 at 4:46pm · Like · 4
    

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