A Wanderer

Posted: September 28, 2014 in Dalvir Gill, Dalvir Gill, Dalvir Gill, Haiga, Haiku Punjabi, Hokku, Photography, Writer
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sunrise . . .
a wanderer from the
rose cutting

ਸੂਰਜ ਉਦੈ . . .
ਕਲਮ ਦੀ ਅੱਖ ‘ਚ
ਇੱਕ ਰਮਤਾ

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  1. dalvirgill says:
    September 28, 2014 at 10:56 pm

    https://www.facebook.com/groups/punjabihaiku/permalink/10153026501792729/

    Dalvir Gill
    August 2 · Brampton

    ਫੇਰੀਵਾਲਾ . . .
    ਕਲਮ ਦੀ ਅੱਖ ‘ਚੋਂ
    ਉੱਗਿਆ ਸੂਰਜ
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    Amanpreet Pannu, Surinder Spera, Jagraj Singh Norway and 19 others like this.
Sarbjit Singh ਆਹਾ !!!
August 3 at 12:59am · Like · 1
Dalvir Gill Thanks Sarbjit Singh VeerJi:
ਕਲਮ = ਧਰਤੀ ਵਿੱਚ ਦੱਬਿਆ ਟਾਹਣੀ ਦਾ ਟੋਟਾ
August 4 at 6:48pm · Like · 4
Sarbjit Singh ਕਿਆ ਬਾਤ ਹੈ ...!!!
August 4 at 8:42pm · Unlike · 1
Harvinder Dhaliwal Bilaspur
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Gurmukh Bhandohal Raiawal
Sohna manvikrn aa Dalvir bhaa
August 4 at 11:27pm · Like
Dalvir Gill Gurmukh hun kaasdaa maanvikrn ho giyaa?
August 4 at 11:31pm · Like
Gurmukh Bhandohal Raiawal Oh veer bahut sohna manvikrn aa baki vidwan dass skde ne aapa taa aap anjan aa 😇
August 4 at 11:34pm · Like · 1
Dalvir Gill a free translation of this poem has been suggest to alter like this ( i've embraced it )

sun rises
from the rose-cutting . . .
a wanderer

sunrise . . .
a wanderer from the
rose cutting
August 6 at 4:46pm · Like · 4

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