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a lullaby
floats on the pool . . .
summer lilies

ਸਰ ‘ਤੇ ਤਿਰੇ
ਇੱਕ ਮਿੱਠੜੀ ਲੋਰੀ . . .
ਕੰਵਲ ਫੁੱਲ

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  1. dalvirgill says:

    Dalvir Gill‎BACK TO HOKKU
    August 12, 2014 · Brampton ·

    a lullaby
    floats on the pool . . .
    summer lilies
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    Pat Geyer, Lisette Root, Kuheli Santra and 3 others like this.
    
    Robert D. Wilson :
    

    I oftentimes listen to water. It exudes a variety of melodies and moods. What is the lullaby’s source? The water? The summer Lillie’s? A combination of both? Your poem allows each reader to answer this question subjectively. It is a beautiful hokku.
    August 23 at 12:55am · Unlike · 1

    Dalvir Gill _/|\_
    August 26 at 7:06pm · Like · 1
    
    Lisette Root :
    

    It is really lovely Dalvir Gill
    August 28 at 1:20am · Like · 1

    Dalvir Gill :
    

    Thanks Dear Lissette. we’re lucky to have a guide who is one of the few who knows and also knows how to teach – a very rare combination. i’ll share sometimes what Don Baird said about him being a great teacher soon i find it in my documents. his way is so concrete that it’s subtle – “Allow(s) each reader to answer … ( the ) … question ( in your poem ) subjectively.”
    August 28 at 1:39pm · Like · 1

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