The Cooing Dove

Posted: September 1, 2014 in Dalvir Gill, Hokku, Writer
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cooing dove
below the rainbow . . .
fall leaves

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  1. dalvirgill says:

    Dalvir Gill

    cooing dove
    under the rainbow . . .
    rosy maestro

    Robert D. Wilson:
    The first two lines are nice . . . The last line says to much and leaves little room for interpretation.

    Suggestion:

    cooing dove
    below the rainbow . . .
    fall leaves

    Dalvir Gill:
    thank you so much!

    Like

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