A Lullaby

Posted: August 23, 2014 in Dalvir Gill, Haiku, Hokku, Writer
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a lullaby
floats on the pool . . .
summer lilies

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  1. dalvirgill says:

    Dalvir Gill
    August 12 at 6:04pm · Brampton

    a lullaby
    floats on the pool . . .
    summer lilies
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    Robert D. Wilson and David Ishaya Osu like this.
    Robert D. Wilson I oftentimes listen to water. It exudes a variety of melodies and moods. What is the lullaby’s source? The water? The summer Lillie’s? A combination of both? Your poem allows each reader to answer this question subjectively. It is a beautiful hokku.
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