White Clouds

Posted: August 19, 2014 in Dalvir Gill, Haiku, Hokku, Writer
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a river
reaching the ocean;
white clouds

 

 

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  1. dalvirgill says:

    Dalvir Gill
    12 hrs · Brampton

    a river
    reaching the ocean;
    white clouds

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    Lisette Root, David Ishaya Osu and 2 others like this.

    Robert D. Wilson:
    A river continually moves, is never static, always changing, heading to the sea. The water in the sea evaporates forming clouds mixed with air currents, forming clouds. Clouds also continually change and move, never static. The river and the clouds are both laden with water, water that goes through an endless cycle. Your choice of “white” versus black or gray adds mystery. A lot to interpret. Nice hokku.
    12 hrs · Unlike · 2

    Dalvir Gill:
    Thank You, so much Master; for interpreting it, that’s how we learn.
    _/|\_

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