Tadpoles

falls loom
over the bridge . . .
tadpoles

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  1. Nice blog… Amazing stuff in you blog i like it…

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  2. dalvirgill says:

    Thanks Rope Access Alberta. 🙂

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  3. dalvirgill says:

    Dalvir Gill
    June 11 at 10:17pm · Brampton

    falls loom
    over the bridge . . .
    tadpole swarm

    falls loom
    over the bridge . . .
    tadpoles
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    Lisette Root, Robert D. Wilson and Asni Amin like this.

    Robert D. Wilson:
    Your second, utilizing an economy of words and avoiding descriptive modifiers works well. A nice hokku that encourages interpretation.

    Dalvir Gill: .
    avoiding descriptive modifiers …
    Thank You so much, Master!
    _/|\_

    Lisette Root:
    Beautiful words:)

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