Scarred Moon

scarred moon –
a bumble bee on a deep
red rose

ਦਾਗ਼ੀ ਚੰਦ੍ਰਮਾ –
ਸੁਰਖ਼ ਗੁਲਾਬ ‘ਤੇ
ਬੈਠਾ ਭੰਬਰਾ

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  1. dalvirgill says:

    Dalvir Gill‎ਪੰਜਾਬੀ ਹਾਇਕੂ حائیکو پنجابی Punjabi Haiku
    February 17, 2013 · Brampton ·

    ਦਾਗੀ ਚੰਦ੍ਰਮਾ –
    ਸੁਰਖ਼ ਗ਼ੁਲਾਬ ‘ਤੇ
    ਬੈਠਾ ਭੰਬਰਾ
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    Karamjit Kaur, Arvinder Kaur, Sarbjit Singh and 44 others like this.
    Amarjit Sathi Tiwana ਵਾਹ!
    February 17, 2013 at 1:03pm · Unlike · 1
    Amrao Gill so beautiful!
    February 17, 2013 at 1:10pm · Unlike · 2
    Sweg Deol Shandar!
    February 17, 2013 at 1:36pm · Unlike · 1
    Sabi Nahal wah es to baad te gall hi khatam ho jandi babeo
    February 17, 2013 at 2:27pm · Unlike · 2
    Sanjay Sanan wOW !!!!!!!!
    February 17, 2013 at 8:00pm · Unlike · 1
    Rajinder Singh Ghumman bahut vadhia…!!
    February 17, 2013 at 8:42pm · Unlike · 1
    Harvinder Dhaliwal Bilaspur ਬਹੁਤ ਖੂਬਸੂਰਤ !!
    February 17, 2013 at 9:13pm · Unlike · 1
    Aurora Geet khoobsort..
    February 18, 2013 at 8:52am · Unlike · 1
    Surinder Spera ਵਾਹ ! ਦਲਵੀਰ ਜੀ ਬਹੁਤ ਸੁੰਦਰ…
    February 19, 2013 at 6:44am · Unlike · 1
    Dalvir Gill many thanks to all the friends.
    March 3, 2013 at 4:37am · Like · 2
    Sukhwinder Walia kmaal ji
    March 3, 2013 at 6:49am · Unlike · 1

    Dhido Gill
    most racist form of haiku by Dalbir Gill….surprised its still being complemented in this group
    March 3, 2013 at 9:57pm · Like · 2

    Amrao Gill The most beautiful haiku of the week!…Love it!
    March 4, 2013 at 2:16am · Unlike · 1
    Dalvir Gill kmaal di interpretation, Dhido Gill 22G.
    March 4, 2013 at 12:40pm · Like

    Dhido Gill
    ਦਲਵੀਰ ਜੀ,,,,ਚੰਦਰਮਾਂ ਲਈ ਦਾਗੀ ਸ਼ਬਦ …ਵਰਤਕੇ…..ਸੁਰਖ ਗੁਲਾਬ ਤੇ ਬੈਠੇ ਕਾਲੇ ਰੰਗ ਦੇ ਭੰਵਰੇ…ਨਾਲ ਸਮੀਪਤਾ……ਦਲਵੀਰ ਬਾਈ ਜੀ….ਏਧਰ ਹੀ ਇਸ਼ਾਰਾ ਕਰਦੀ ਹੈ
    March 4, 2013 at 12:46pm · Like

    Dalvir Gill jiveN chandrmaa de daag vi khoobsoort hn uveN …………
    March 4, 2013 at 12:48pm · Like
    Dhido Gill ਦਾਗੀ ….ਸ਼ਬਦ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਉਚਿੱਤ ਨਹਿਂ…. ਦਲਵੀਰ ਜੀ…ਸ਼ਬਦ ਚੋਣ ਦਾ ਮਸਲਾ….ਵੈਸੇ ਵੀ ਦਾਗੀ…..ਜਿਆਦਾ ਕਿਰਦਾਰ ਲਈ ਵਰਤਿਆ ਜਾਂਦਾ ਹੈ…..ਦਾਗੀ ਚੇਹਰਾ ਸੋਹਣਾ ਚੇਹਰਾ ਕਹਿਣ ਲਈ ਨੀ ਵਰਤਿਆ ਜਾਂਦਾ
    March 4, 2013 at 12:50pm · Like
    Dalvir Gill dhabba, daag taaN ikko gll hai, hor kujh sujhao aapaaN fragment kiveN likhiye ?
    March 4, 2013 at 12:52pm · Like

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